Monday, April 24, 2006

Longing....

My deepest desire,
My faith, my fire…
That’s you.

I travelled far far away
But the love kept growing each day

I saw your face in myriad places…
In trees, in light, in empty spaces…

Tried as I could, couldn’t pull myself away
I realise now, this love is meant to stay.

Like a whirlwind it keeps churning…
Like a fire it keeps burning…

Hope someday, you and I can burn together…
Drown ourselves in this love forever…

3 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

One of your best compositions as yet. So deep and intense yet so simple and free flowing. I just loved it.

8:27 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Very well written..
Hope, Love & desire..you mixred it all with a little bit of fire!

i quite liked this part of one of your writings....

Us geeli ret par
aaj bhi tumhare kadmon
ke nishan nazar aate hain….

Did anyone tell you that your hindi writing reflects Gulzar's style?

1:25 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I agree with amit ...bahut dinon ke baad kuch achha padhne ko mila hain ...laajawab hai tumhari style..you are the best

Fred

9:13 PM  

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