Tum
A very consciously written halka-fulka poem.... :)
Tum acha kehta ho
To bahut acha lagta hai
Tum bura kehte ho
To dil hi toot jaataa hai
Tum paas aate ho
To har sapna sach hone lagta hai
Tum door jaate ho
To khud se hi saath choot jaata hai
Tum muskurate ho to
Saara aalam khilkhilata hai
Tum rooth jaate ho
To khushiyon se naata hi toot jaata hai
Tumhi se main hoon
Yeh shayad tumne kabhi jaana hi nahin
Dekho, suno.. samjho
Kyun har saans mein tumhara naam sunaai deta hai
Tum acha kehta ho
To bahut acha lagta hai
Tum bura kehte ho
To dil hi toot jaataa hai
Tum paas aate ho
To har sapna sach hone lagta hai
Tum door jaate ho
To khud se hi saath choot jaata hai
Tum muskurate ho to
Saara aalam khilkhilata hai
Tum rooth jaate ho
To khushiyon se naata hi toot jaata hai
Tumhi se main hoon
Yeh shayad tumne kabhi jaana hi nahin
Dekho, suno.. samjho
Kyun har saans mein tumhara naam sunaai deta hai
posted by Shilpa F D'Mello at 11:04 PM
5 Comments:
nice one! this peom says a lot...
very well written.
thanks for the encouraging words..! i wonder how you found my blog though :)
are u on ryze?
i see lovely strings of thought on ur page...
Very simple yet very beautiful! It is halka-fulka only in words else it holds a very deep meaning! Keep writing.
it may be halka fulka as far as the grammar and gender goes but it's cool.
even i for the love of god cannot understand how one is to know whether a chair is masculine or femenine.
but that is the way hindi language is.
but communication teaches us that the thought always has and always will supercede words.
its a beautiful post. please write more often...
cheers
very simple still elegant great writing great poem...
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